
9
March 2, 2008
I hear
chill winds of time
rise in dissonance
seasons of cold rain
hiss and tick
the weathered panes
I feel
life’s essence slowly slip
my being’s grip
it’s warmth
ever-fading
the pall and ache
wrap firm my bones
suppress my spirit
slowly steal
my living core
I know despair
of rigid form
drained of vital sap
drawn and withered
robbed
of flex and grace
I watch
my light of memory
dim
my pool of knowledge
cloud
I see beloved leave
one
by
one
beyond my call
to depart the joy
and chaos
of this temporal plane
what remains
is sorrowed pain
then
I hear you
call my name
summon me
to your embrace
to sooth and comfort
my discontent
to draw me
into your sphere of faith
that life is good
that we are blessed
just to have known
all this
and in that moment
I too believe



i await your uplifting conclusion… this was very beautifully told….
Each word so powerful and vital to your poem.
I love the style!
absolutely beautiful.
we certainly are ‘blessed just to have known all this”
I like your writing style.
get going
Nice style and inspiring words.
from one end of the spectrum to the other… beautifully spoken and full of hope… amen
From a sense of rotting in nightmare to the candle flicker of hope. A lovely ascension!
I enjoyed the shift in mood and tone of this piece. Most definitely a change.
Profound. This was uplifting.
very intense… filled with hope
What a lovely piece
what a beautiful faith inspiring poem….
beautiful
It’s a prayer of sorts. We are blessed indeed just to find ourselves in this life. I really enjoyed it.
Good to have found you amidst a sea awash with words. Sublime. We will be back to read again, and more.