Comments on: 18 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Fri, 16 Jan 2009 21:45:17 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: poem « Ferdinand’s Gifts http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-271 poem « Ferdinand’s Gifts Mon, 02 Jun 2008 18:47:30 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-271 [...] original link here [...] [...] original link here [...]

]]> By: kgjames http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-270 kgjames Mon, 02 Jun 2008 01:28:07 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-270 Amazing. Glad my friend left a link to it in google talk. Peace and love in grief and love, Kimberly http://labortrials.wordpress.com Amazing. Glad my friend left a link to it in google talk.
Peace and love in grief and love,
Kimberly
http://labortrials.wordpress.com

]]> By: Jennifer http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-269 Jennifer Sat, 31 May 2008 13:19:27 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-269 The short lines and paragraph breaks create the rhythm of somebody gasping for breath, speaking haltingly, perhaps trying not to cry - the perfect sound to match your words. And I love the phrase "chrysalis of anguish." The short lines and paragraph breaks create the rhythm of somebody gasping for breath, speaking haltingly, perhaps trying not to cry – the perfect sound to match your words. And I love the phrase “chrysalis of anguish.”

]]> By: whypaisley http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-268 whypaisley Fri, 30 May 2008 12:37:24 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-268 i had to change my domain name to <a href="http://whypaisley.com/" rel="nofollow">whypaisley.com</a> please change your links and or feed as necessary all you will have to do is remove the - from between why and paisley,, everything else will remain the same and will redirect you to the correct page.... sorry for the inconvenience... i had to change my domain name to whypaisley.com please change your links and or feed as necessary

all you will have to do is remove the – from between why and paisley,, everything else will remain the same and will redirect you to the correct page…. sorry for the inconvenience…

]]> By: OneMoreBeliever http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-267 OneMoreBeliever Fri, 30 May 2008 00:33:32 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-267 murmurs of life barely breathing ...poignant... and leaves me speechless.. murmurs of life barely breathing …poignant… and leaves me speechless..

]]> By: annie http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-266 annie Thu, 29 May 2008 21:04:29 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-266 Grief and recovery is so private, so unique to the person who suffers it. We may believe we have been there as the other is but in truth, we were all so deeply, painfully alone when in the midst of it. The structure of your poem could not make that solitude more clear. Grief and recovery is so private, so unique to the person who suffers it. We may believe we have been there as the other is but in truth, we were all so deeply, painfully alone when in the midst of it. The structure of your poem could not make that solitude more clear.

]]> By: WillThink4Wine http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-265 WillThink4Wine Wed, 28 May 2008 19:16:52 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-265 Such a deep well of sorrow, searching for the courage to live on. Beautifully done. Such a deep well of sorrow, searching for the courage to live on. Beautifully done.

]]> By: Raven http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-263 Raven Wed, 28 May 2008 02:15:03 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-263 Exquisite. An agonizingly pure and true reflection of deep loss and deep grief. Beautifully done. Exquisite. An agonizingly pure and true reflection of deep loss and deep grief. Beautifully done.

]]> By: nathan1313 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-262 nathan1313 Tue, 27 May 2008 14:16:50 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-262 The form and diction nicely match the subject, the searching and reaching quality. Well done. The form and diction nicely match the subject, the searching and reaching quality. Well done.

]]> By: SandyCarlson http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/2008/05/23/18/#comment-261 SandyCarlson Tue, 27 May 2008 10:08:20 +0000 http://winedarksea.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-261 I agree with Pam. I share in the emotions of this narrator as I move through the poem. To be as vulnerable as a newborn fawn and to take those first steps is no small thing. Thanks for this. I agree with Pam. I share in the emotions of this narrator as I move through the poem. To be as vulnerable as a newborn fawn and to take those first steps is no small thing. Thanks for this.

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